The bride was getting ready while a car raced down the road. The guy in the car was going as fast as he could to get to the wedding. The guy was going so he could object to the wedding, because he loves her a lot.
- Who: Max, the man racing to the chapel
- What: a man raced to the wedding because he seemed to be late
- Where: In a church out in a country
- When: On the "big day", the wedding day
- Why: all we know is that he went because he had to be at the wedding for some reason, and he was late because of all the impediments on his trip there
- How: there where to many impediments or obstacles
New story:
It was a cold rainy day, when a guy raced through the country in a medium size silver car. At some points he raced through a forest type setting. On the way many things seemed to slow him down. The man wipes sweat off his forward because he is very nervous. The girl gets ready, puts the final touches into place, the others waiting for the wedding to start. The man races over a bridge, the bride looks out the window, looking out, seeming like she s longing someone or something. The man bursts into the door, interrupting the wedding, looks shoot through the air at different people. Obviously some feelings where felt.
New story (with quotes);
The big day has come; Rachel and Mike where finally getting married. A man named max, the best friend of Rachel raced through the country side to get to the wedding.
He was oh so late but thats because of the many impediments in the road. Max bursts in the door, while the couple are about to kiss. Feeling filled stares bounced about the room.
The bride described that moment as " the best moment in her life, realizing that Max should be the one up here will me," (Rachel Green).
Max suddenly dropped and a feeling over took him, he said "I thought today I was just going to see one of my friends get married, but today I realized as I looked into her yes that she was the one, I also wondered why this was the first time I realized this," (Max Golding) .
The bride uncontrollably stepped down from the alter and ran and gave Max a hug. The audience faces dropped, one aunt said that "it was like a scene from a movie," (Nancy Grace). Another uncle describing the moment as "unbelievable, nothing like he has ever seen before," (James Kelly).
The next day the two starlight lovers went to vegas and got married.





















